Monday 14 February 2011

FEED BACK on our title sequence

FEEDBACK, 



in our lesson on wednesday 2rd of February our class was making adjustments to their videos of their title sequence this gave us enough time to sort our title sequence out to watch them which was a good idea because near towards the end of the lesson we got the present our title sequence. we got to see three of the groups title sequence out of five including mine and paula's title sequence as there was about 15 minuets left we were not able to watch the rest of the groups title sequence and not given them feedback, we got the chance to show our title sequences to the rest of the class and as we did we got feedback from the class and the teacher,at first i did not want our title sequence to be shown as it was not finished yet but i am glad to have done. As our title sequence was viewed by others the feedback we had got was that our title sequence is rather confusing, as they did not know what was going on and it is a bit over the place as in the shots did not follow on well for them to get the idea so we had to change our title sequence. as there is not much time left we have decided to keep the same idea just change to way of how we film it and the shots. because we we changed our title sequence the improvements that needed to be made were; improving shots for better views making the shots clearer, include new shots for more details. Also the lighting should be viewed differently,either brighter or dimer for the full effect to see if the shots work better with the lighting or without. Going back into it would take a lot of time, as we would have to re shoot certain shots or all of it Which means that the story boards have to be different to match the shots that would of been filmed. we have considered changing people, as Danny's character has to look a bit more evil/violent instead of someone who seems harmless.

NEW CHARACTERS

LIAM FLETCHER PLAYING DANNY
We have decided to use Liam as Danny, as he looks unique. This means that he has a different style to everybody else. The fact of him being unique may mean that he could do different things than other people. In this case, he would be a violent person with a mental illness. However, his tattoos and clothing hide everything away as people would be more focused on his appearance.


LAURA POUND
This is another character that has been involved in our film/title sequence. Laura does not play any parts in our movie but is also a victim as seen in the images below. We have chosen Laura to be one of the victims as she is also an ordinary young girl just getting on with her life, and she does not look suspicious or any different from other ordinary girls.


NEW STORY BORD